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EVERLASTING DEATH.
HELLO. well, this will be the last of my poems that i will put up.
why? i dont know u telll me. ;)
its free verse. ;) enjoy. Meanwhile, , i shall think of more questions to stump our fragil little minds. lol
ta ta! lol bu-bye.
^.~
EVERLASTING DEATH
Death comes silently
as if it shall never appear at all...
Death enters your mind
As if lurking to destroy what makes you sane.
Death visits your conscience
Wanting to know your every weakness
Death wanders endlessly
through every corridor of your thoughts
Death erupts your every nerve
devouring your tendar pain for its own victory
Death echos eeringly
from the sound of your tormanted howls
Death leaves silently
searching paitently
Because....
DEATH is never satisfied.
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Permalink Reply by scribbler on
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Bravo, Betty. I like the pacing and the mood you captured there. Don't you go disappearing on us! You'd be very much missed.
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Permalink Reply by Betzy Crypt on
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awww..thanks! i feel the love! lol
scribbler said:Bravo, Betty. I like the pacing and the mood you captured there. Don't you go disappearing on us! You'd be very much missed.
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Permalink Reply by Kay Elizabeth on
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I agree, no vanishing acts allowed! :) I love the eeriness of this poem, Betty. It gives me shivers up my spine. :)
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haha, that was what i intended. lol thanks once again. i truly feel the love. ;)
Kay Elizabeth said:I agree, no vanishing acts allowed! :) I love the eeriness of this poem, Betty. It gives me shivers up my spine. :)
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