Give me your meaning! lol tell me what you think?

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Permalink Reply by Kay Elizabeth on September 1, 2010 at 4:04am

I like the T poem Betty. The M one I struggled to follow. In both I find the capitalization very distracting. On the book titles, dead memories is on the bland side. Could you substitute another word like lifeless or inanimate for dead? Midnight Blood's been used already a few times by writers and musicians. Here's a tip: always Google titles you're thinking of using and see if anyone else has beaten you to it.

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Permalink Reply by scribbler on September 5, 2010 at 6:24am

I want to hear the story behind the T's that you hinted about, Betty! I'm holding my opinions hostage until you tell me LOL. :)

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Permalink Reply by Betzy Crypt on September 6, 2010 at 2:21am

hahaha,, lol aight. um...pretty much tells a story of...well.
this is what my mind was forming as i wrote it.
a girl,laying a hand upon the bark of a tree, her mind wandering, reminding her of the past. and her tears that began to fall remenscing her lost love. lol
there. now spill it. lol

scribbler said:

I want to hear the story behind the T's that you hinted about, Betty! I'm holding my opinions hostage until you tell me LOL. :)

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Permalink Reply by Kay Elizabeth on September 6, 2010 at 9:22am

Did you come up with any alternatives for the titles Betty or are you going to stick with what you have already?

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Permalink Reply by Betzy Crypt on September 7, 2010 at 12:54am

well, kinda hard for me to change them, because well, each title fits so well with the part of the storyline it expresses. like for example, the midnight blood one, it introduces a character whos last name is midnight, AND blood, is for the blooding of a human becoming a vampire. so yeah.
and..um abandoned scars, it goes for the part of the storyline of which the main character, is forced into dealing with memories that he abandoned long ago.... the past, that he wishes to forget, but the scars upon his forearms and chest remind him all over again.
as for Dead memories, in that one told in a new main characters view, because the main character Dies at the end of the 4th book, she (amy) the lover of the main character, finds herself completley in mental distress, at his death, so it all connects cuz all the other books are their memories, preety much the books are flashbacks in her point of view, a LOT of drama in that book of which she trys to kill herself(because the fact he DID die by her hand.) but she chooses to live because she finds out he left her with a child...and bla bla bla..yada yada yada lol more to that, with a tight perfect ending.
so everything literally is Dead memories.
, to me and the character, Dead. is the most fortunate word to use as a title. besides, lol "inanimate memores" doesnt sound as catchy dont u think?

so all in all, there is a reason behind each word i use for the title. ;)

Kay Elizabeth said:

Did you come up with any alternatives for the titles Betty or are you going to stick with what you have already?

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Permalink Reply by scribbler on September 10, 2010 at 3:34am

Heck, that made my eyes fill up when I read that poem again with that in mind. Good job, young lady. :)

Betty Damil said:

hahaha,, lol aight. um...pretty much tells a story of...well.
this is what my mind was forming as i wrote it.
a girl,laying a hand upon the bark of a tree, her mind wandering, reminding her of the past. and her tears that began to fall remenscing her lost love. lol
there. now spill it. lol

scribbler said:

I want to hear the story behind the T's that you hinted about, Betty! I'm holding my opinions hostage until you tell me LOL. :)

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Permalink Reply by Betzy Crypt on September 10, 2010 at 4:11am

hahaha. thanks scribbler. ;) lol

scribbler said:

Heck, that made my eyes fill up when I read that poem again with that in mind. Good job, young lady. :)

Betty Damil said:

hahaha,, lol aight. um...pretty much tells a story of...well.
this is what my mind was forming as i wrote it.
a girl,laying a hand upon the bark of a tree, her mind wandering, reminding her of the past. and her tears that began to fall remenscing her lost love. lol
there. now spill it. lol

scribbler said:

I want to hear the story behind the T's that you hinted about, Betty! I'm holding my opinions hostage until you tell me LOL. :)

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Permalink Reply by Kay Elizabeth on September 11, 2010 at 5:04am

You do whatever you thinks best, Betty. :) All I ever offer are suggestions for you and anybody else are things to think about. As I hinted at already, it can cause problems when the name's the same or similar to another author's book. You don't want someone buying theirs instead of yours! ;)

They all sound interesting. On scars, I have heard them referred to as "life medals". I like that, since I have one of my own. It's from a car accident I had as a kid and even though others don't notice it, I do. I thought life medals was a good description of what a scar is. :)

Betty Damil said:

well, kinda hard for me to change them, because well, each title fits so well with the part of the storyline it expresses. like for example, the midnight blood one, it introduces a character whos last name is midnight, AND blood, is for the blooding of a human becoming a vampire. so yeah.
and..um abandoned scars, it goes for the part of the storyline of which the main character, is forced into dealing with memories that he abandoned long ago.... the past, that he wishes to forget, but the scars upon his forearms and chest remind him all over again.
as for Dead memories, in that one told in a new main characters view, because the main character Dies at the end of the 4th book, she (amy) the lover of the main character, finds herself completley in mental distress, at his death, so it all connects cuz all the other books are their memories, preety much the books are flashbacks in her point of view, a LOT of drama in that book of which she trys to kill herself(because the fact he DID die by her hand.) but she chooses to live because she finds out he left her with a child...and bla bla bla..yada yada yada lol more to that, with a tight perfect ending.
so everything literally is Dead memories.
, to me and the character, Dead. is the most fortunate word to use as a title. besides, lol "inanimate memores" doesnt sound as catchy dont u think?

so all in all, there is a reason behind each word i use for the title. ;)

Kay Elizabeth said:

Did you come up with any alternatives for the titles Betty or are you going to stick with what you have already?

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