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The Entrance

So, this is a story a finished over the summer and have spent countless hours trying to get it published. Can I just have some critique from you guys?

And before you tell me most of it's "crap", just remember I wrote this at 10, so I honestly have no idea how to write.

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Permalink Reply by Callie Leah on November 7, 2010 at 3:16pm

I'm sorry, Jasmine, it won't let me open it because I don't have that application on my computer. If you could copy and post it on Microsoft Word, then that would help! I really would like to read it!

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Permalink Reply by Jasmine Andrade on November 7, 2010 at 9:42pm

Oh, I'm sorry, I forgot lots of people don't have that type of program xD I think you can just save the file and then view it in your Downloads. If not, let me know, and I can get something arranged.

Callie Leah said:

I'm sorry, Jasmine, it won't let me open it because I don't have that application on my computer. If you could copy and post it on Microsoft Word, then that would help! I really would like to read it!

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Permalink Reply by Callie Leah on November 7, 2010 at 10:06pm

Oh, that worked! :) I'm reading it right now!

Jasmine Andrade said:

Oh, I'm sorry, I forgot lots of people don't have that type of program xD I think you can just save the file and then view it in your Downloads. If not, let me know, and I can get something arranged.

Callie Leah said:
I'm sorry, Jasmine, it won't let me open it because I don't have that application on my computer. If you could copy and post it on Microsoft Word, then that would help! I really would like to read it!

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Permalink Reply by Jasmine Andrade on November 10, 2010 at 12:34am

Yay!

Callie Leah said:

Oh, that worked! :) I'm reading it right now!

Jasmine Andrade said:
Oh, I'm sorry, I forgot lots of people don't have that type of program xD I think you can just save the file and then view it in your Downloads. If not, let me know, and I can get something arranged.

Callie Leah said:
I'm sorry, Jasmine, it won't let me open it because I don't have that application on my computer. If you could copy and post it on Microsoft Word, then that would help! I really would like to read it!