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"Nice piece. The flow is a little up and down. In the last segment, I would use (Fly)…"

Robert L. Allen replied May 9, 2013 to Comments Please :)

 4 Sep 24, 2013
Reply by Pritha Chattopadhyay

"I would look at the sentence, tense. I flow is good. I would use Italics instead if…"

Robert L. Allen replied Mar 27, 2013 to Endings

 2 Mar 28, 2013
Reply by RF Husnik

"Second stanza, fourth and sixth sentences stops the flow, might think a rewrite.   T…"

Robert L. Allen replied Mar 27, 2013 to Those who wear masks

 1 Mar 27, 2013
Reply by Robert L. Allen

"Second sentence, Perhaps think about replacing (there) with (here).  Sixth sentence,…"

Robert L. Allen replied Mar 27, 2013 to My Savior

 3 Jun 15, 2013
Reply by Shirley Ann Long

"Powerful piece! I don't believe we, the reader, needs to know what happened. Each re…"

Robert L. Allen replied Aug 13, 2012 to The spell of tears

 6 Aug 14, 2012
Reply by Lydia J Belt

"I can hear the pain. I know this was hard to write, even if it came easy. Third line…"

Robert L. Allen replied Jan 9, 2012 to Where is this Bus?

 5 Jan 9, 2012
Reply by Jonathon Koerner

"Powerful!!! I would try to stay away from the ( to be ) phazes. And I think you were…"

Robert L. Allen replied Jan 9, 2012 to In My December

 4 Jan 9, 2012
Reply by Jonathon Koerner

"Beautiful poem. I would change the word (a) in the seventh line to read (the) soul,…"

Robert L. Allen replied Jan 9, 2012 to Between the Fine Line

 3 Jan 9, 2012
Reply by Robert L. Allen

"Very nice poem but the rhyme changes from every sentence to every other halfway thro…"

Robert L. Allen replied Jan 3, 2012 to A Brighter Day!

 6 Jan 7, 2012
Reply by Tabitha R. Pike

"Good poem. But the flow was bouncy..."

Robert L. Allen replied Jan 3, 2012 to A Christmas message in a poem

 3 Jan 3, 2012
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