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'Beneath The Mask'
'Beneath The Mask'
By fel
Beneath the mask her wander lies
projecting an image for lovers eyes.
Such endless beauty my eyes behold,
under the mask she wears so bold
She hides behind her vain-full pride,
The twist and turn of storms inside.
She sits so still, so calm a girl
And guards with faith her hidden pearl.
Behold the mask covers her face
For between its cracks lies hidden grace
And beneath that mystic mask of wood
Lies secrets of a love so good
She needs to see through sudden glee
She needs not wear the mask for me.
In her glory I need to bask
For I love the girl who wear the mask.
Beneath the mask
There is a love and compassion
Inhibition and insecurities,
But there is also the girl I love
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Permalink Reply by Birgitta Abimbola Heikka on
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Hi Fel,
I loved your poem "Beneath The Mask." It's a beautiful poem. However (and you don't need to do this), I'd change the "wander" in the first stanza to "wonder"and add "that" after "Behold the mask" in the 3rd stanza. Very good poem.
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Permalink Reply by FELISHA FRANCIS on
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well thank you, good observation
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I've been told that many times.
FELISHA FRANCIS said:well thank you, good observation
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