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Permalink Reply by Robert L. Allen on November 12, 2011 at 7:30am

Charming! I believe if you are going to use rhyme poetry, you should ude it throughout the poem. The movement sounds better. And the second line, I would change the word (that) to (a) a high tree...

Permalink Reply by Abby Mains on November 12, 2011 at 2:32pm

ok............ what is ude?

Permalink Reply by Cleveland W. Gibson on November 12, 2011 at 11:41pm

'ude' is meant to be 'use' as you will find out by substitution.

Permalink Reply by Robert L. Allen on November 14, 2011 at 7:31pm

Typo

Abby Mains said:

ok............ what is ude?

Permalink Reply by Abby Mains on November 15, 2011 at 2:00am

Robert L. Allen said:

Typo

what do you mean by typo?!

Permalink Reply by Abby Mains on November 15, 2011 at 2:31am

Abby Mains said:

Robert L. Allen said:

Typo

 I just found out what typo meant. Look, I meant to write wanna because it sounds better in the poem in my opinion. If you are going to be a critic about my work, then I'll block your messages! What the heck is with ude and typo?! Is a girl who is ten years old supposed to know what that means! I have not learned those words!

Permalink Reply by Robert L. Allen on November 16, 2011 at 7:31am

Sorry, I thought you were looking for feedback. Won't happen again...

Abby Mains said:

Abby Mains said:

Robert L. Allen said:

Typo

 I just found out what typo meant. Look, I meant to write wanna because it sounds better in the poem in my opinion. If you are going to be a critic about my work, then I'll block your messages! What the heck is with ude and typo?! Is a girl who is ten years old supposed to know what that means! I have not learned those words!

Permalink Reply by Abby Mains on November 16, 2011 at 3:58pm

It is alright, sorry for being cranky.