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Shattered hearts, world ripped and torn apart

Why must I care, this just isn't fair

Cant carry them all, legs wobble until I fall

Still I fight, with all my might

Thought it was over, then I got sober

Freed minds, one cell at a time

See clear, once fog dissapeared

Still a long road,not so bad when your not alone

More will come, once they are done making excuses

Freedom is being aware of evil, but not fearing

We are strong as a whole, but solo we may fall

So stop being weak, and grab my hand to be

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Permalink Reply by Birgitta Abimbola Heikka on January 6, 2012 at 6:16pm

Jonthon, I like your style of poetry writing. I think it's unique. I like the line "Freedom is being aware of evil, but not fearing." That's a good advice.

Permalink Reply by Jonathon Koerner on January 6, 2012 at 11:40pm

Thx, I just wrote this recently. It is unique, but I am starting to think, most people will not understand. Glad you did, "freed minds,one cell at a time" was my fav line. Because originally i was talking about brain cells, but can aslo be applied to jail cells. Idk if you caught that.

Permalink Reply by Tabitha R. Pike on January 7, 2012 at 1:01pm

You write a lot like I do. I noticed how you flow with a freedom, it makes it great.

Permalink Reply by Jonathon Koerner on January 7, 2012 at 6:19pm

Thanks Tabitha, yes I do write a lot. My favorite way to write, is completely freehand and just off the top of my head. I will look out for some of your work, always enjoy good poetry.

Permalink Reply by Birgitta Abimbola Heikka on January 7, 2012 at 6:42pm

I think I do understand what you mean.

Birgitta Abimbola Heikka said:

Jonthon, I like your style of poetry writing. I think it's unique. I like the line "Freedom is being aware of evil, but not fearing." That's a good advice.

Permalink Reply by Jonathon Koerner on January 7, 2012 at 7:20pm

Yeah, one very fun exercise I like doing is with scrabble(which Most writers enjoy playing). But what you do is play a game, then using the words on the board, write a poem, its extra fun and difficult if you only use the words on the board. This is interesting because it makes it completely random.

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