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Permalink Reply by Robert L. Allen on July 18, 2011 at 3:20am

I read your poems. I hear the struggle, it was quite open. I write in a way where if the reader truly wants to feel my pain, he/she must seek deeper into the murky waters where most poets live. I suggest, althought the writing was great, to write deeper. I beileve you have it in you. And never explain your work, if the reader doesn't get it, they won't understand with explination either. Keep writing. Sent some pieces out to publisher and don't get hurt if they discard you. Keep trying. I promise you will find your way...