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My Savior

God you shine your light on me during the hardest of times,
Brightening my day and letting me know that you are there,
Taking my pain, my stress, and my worries of all kinds,
Making my mind, body, and heart feel so much lighter.

God you help me walk down every path I take,
Catching me when I stumble or fall over anything,
Patching me up and saying be patient and wait,
Making sure my cuts and scrapes are healing.

God you watch out for me more than I can ever know,
Letting obstacles get in my path for a good reason,
Teaching me and showing me the right way to go,
Guiding me through everything and everyone.

God you know more about me and who I am,
Loving me no matter what if I win or lose,
Picking that special someone to have my hand,
Bringing him into my life whenever you choose.

God you are my savior.

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Permalink Reply by Robert L. Allen on March 27, 2013 at 5:26pm

Second sentence, Perhaps think about replacing (there) with (here).

Sixth sentence, Catching me when I stumble and fall, I'd take out over anything,

Good work, keep it up.

Permalink Reply by Lydia J Belt on March 28, 2013 at 12:16am

thank you for the advice :)

Robert L. Allen said:

Second sentence, Perhaps think about replacing (there) with (here).

Sixth sentence, Catching me when I stumble and fall, I'd take out over anything,

Good work, keep it up.

Permalink Reply by Shirley Ann Long on June 15, 2013 at 12:59am