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Questions and ?????

These are 2 of my poems One has no title and I dont think it needs one....Both are nice and short enjoy.. Suggestions/comments/advice below as always..
~Carly

Questions:

Questions are like puzzles

Some better left unanswered

Some lead to life

Some lead to death

Questions better left unsaid

??????:

Lightning and thunder

In sync with each other

They give off

Both light and sound

Elements of life

They bring storms

Of all sorts

Rain, sleet, and hail

And many more

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Permalink Reply by Birgitta Abimbola Heikka on February 2, 2012 at 8:18pm

Carly, I enjoyed reading both poems. They are very insightful. However, I have a poem in response to the first one.

Questions are like puzzles

meant to be solved by the brave.

Questions left unanswered,

are like sores left untreated.

I think the second poem should be titled “LIFE.” Great poems for the mind.

Birgitta.

Permalink Reply by Carly Jean Montgomery-Wildermuth on May 31, 2012 at 5:14pm

Thank you so much your response is very helpful to me. I am deeply sorry it has taken me so long to respond to you. I have been very busy. Once again I'm sorry it has taken me so long to respond but thank you again for your response and suggestion. :)

Birgitta Abimbola Heikka said:

Carly, I enjoyed reading both poems. They are very insightful. However, I have a poem in response to the first one.

Questions are like puzzles

meant to be solved by the brave.

Questions left unanswered,

are like sores left untreated.

I think the second poem should be titled “LIFE.” Great poems for the mind.

Birgitta.