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kara looked around in the acid forest and realized Falcon was gone. DAMN, she lost him, again. when he finds her, he's gonna be mad as hell. she knew he has a bad temper. she walked through the trees until she saw him sitting near the pond of Blood.

"Kara, keep up." was all he said. 

what, no fit, no yelling. did their first kiss really change the way Falcon was.

she looked at him and caught his eye, noticing he was mad, just not at her.

near his foot, Seesaw laid with five arrows out of his back. Kara gasped, seesaw was falcon's best friend.

"Oh falcon, im so sorry,"

"Get over it."

his words were harsh and almost bitter. yes, he defiantly was gonna kick somebodies ass today and they arent gonna enjoy it either.

he rolled seesaw into the blood pond and took kara by the hand and pulled her away.

"How did he die?"

"Demon slayers. need to start minding there goddamn business and leave us alone."

kara knew he was right,seesaw couldnt hurt a fly if he wanted. her mind was starting to wonder.

what about lila?"

falcon, what happened to lila?"

he stops, thoughts triggering in his mind.

yes what did happen to lila?

he held kara's hand tighter and broke out into another run. they ran out of the forest but into bigger problems.

"damn, just my luck."

"Our luck."

five demon slayers with their arms crossed were there looking at us for a next meal.

falcon turned to me.

"stay back and out of my way."

i backed up and looked at the slayers. they didn't look much human as falcon or seesaw do.

falcon finally drew out his demon fangs and claws and attacked at full speed.

 

THIS STORY IS ABOUT A GIRL NAME KARA WHO HAS GOTTEN LOST IN A MAGICAL FOREST AND ENTERED THE DEMON WORLD. THE OLD DEMON HURON MADE HIS YOUNGER SON FALCON TAKE HER BACK HOME SAFELY, BUT THIS IS THE TIME WHEN THE DEMONS ARE NOT ALLOWED OUT BECAUSE THE DEMON SLAYERS ARE COMING BACK. IT IS UP TO FALCON, THE LEGENDARY GOD/DEMON WARRIOR TO GET KARA HOME WITHOUT HER GETTING HER KILLED OR KIDNAPPED.

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Comment by Betzy Crypt on March 6, 2011 at 1:50am

Im really starting to get attached to this story. lol 

reminds me of the show Inuyasha. u know it? 

the storyline is f****** interesting and makes me wonder what happens in that forest.

and I came up with a good ending...suppose he gets  her home, but dies doing so. 

/??? lol idk just thinking. lol

 

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