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New Name

Well Ive been thinking about my third book after New Beginnings is published. I was thinking about the cover espicially and since there is a major twist that no one will see coming. Ive decided to change the title from Sins of the Father to Journey's End. So for the third book in the bedroom wall series. The official title will now be On The Bedroom Wall: Journey's End.

What ya think about my new title?

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Comment by Mandy Steinfeldt Crane on March 1, 2012 at 7:52pm: Well, I may be going back to Sins of The Father after all which is the title I really like. I think I might have found a way to do a cover for it after all. We shall see what happens.. who knows. You never can tell when it comes to covers and trying to find the perfect one. And one that goes along with the title.

Comment by GD Thompson Sr. on March 5, 2012 at 10:03pm: Hey MSC,

Just a note: Sins of the Father is attractive for those that like a good bad guy story about placing blame and really learing about the wrongs someone might have done-depending on one's perspective. Journey's end alludes to a more comforting story where the essence of the story is about what one learns about themselves after the journey has been made, with perhaps an intersting interlude into the hearts of your characters along the way. Anyway, let me know what you decide. I would be interested to find out which way you went.

GD Thompson, Sr.

Comment by GD Thompson Sr. on March 5, 2012 at 10:08pm: I just thought about something and had to comment again. When I wrote book II of the Angel Chronicles Series, I too queried over a cover for the book which made me want to change the name, but in the end I wound up changing the name and discovered that the cover I had in mind was better suited for the name change. Anyway, good luck with decision, as she can be a mindbender.

Comment by Mandy Steinfeldt Crane on March 6, 2012 at 2:11am: Hey GD,

I really liked Sins of the Father because it was the one that fit the best with the Bedroom Wall Series and the twists that come out in the final book. But I was having a hard time designing a cover that wouldnt be misunderstood. So I got to playing around and Journey's End came about with a title that seem to fit the cover. But then I changed one thing and Sin's of the Father seem to fit then. So I was going to go back to my first title but reading what you said about both titles and that is exactly what they do leaves me wondering which way to go. since both titles could easily work. My characters have come along way since the first book On the Bedroom Wall and now in the second book New Beginnings they transform yet again and even in the last story there are things that happen that will change the lives of several of the characters and they will again be transformed. As will the readers with what I have planned. A rollarcoaster ride for sure! But thank you for your opnion on both titles you gave me something to really think about.

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