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About this poem: I wrote it because when I wrote this everything felt unbalanced and everything was in war with itself or its opposite. Same as always, comment & advice below Thank you!!
War in worlds:
Light and dark
Life and death
Love and hate
A giant war
Between
Good and bad
Ever meant to end?
Is there a way for peace to come
In these worlds that shouldn’t collide
Is it possible for it all to end?
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Only if one allows it. The choice is ours, sometimes not so easily done when angry or full of emotion, but only I, can allow something to begin or to end...when I am ready. -Hilary Wreidt Thompson
Hilary can you please tell me what you mean by your response im not really sure....
Hilary Wreidt Thompson said:
Only if one allows it. The choice is ours, sometimes not so easily done when angry or full of emotion, but only I, can allow something to begin or to end...when I am ready. -Hilary Wreidt Thompson
Hi. I suppose I ws pondering in my own world of battles and obstacles I have had to face. I love you poem, thank you.
I'd like to see the sentences stronger thus giving life to them. It is a powerful piece! And could be even more with a little work...
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