A Fight

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Permalink Reply by Jonathon Koerner on January 8, 2012 at 12:22am

wow, really like this...lol where's the strongly like button

Permalink Reply by Tabitha R. Pike on January 8, 2012 at 12:11pm

LOL, thanks Johnathon, I am glad you liked this one.  It was written from the heart so many years ago.

Jonathon Koerner said:

wow, really like this...lol where's the strongly like button

Permalink Reply by Birgitta Abimbola Heikka on January 11, 2012 at 8:06pm

Good poem. I liked the rhythm from beginning to end.  My favorite lines were:

 

"My mouth speaks no sound

While my soul seeks to be found

My body is a vessel

With such verdict it wrestles."

 

Loved it.

Permalink Reply by Kellie Mc Carthy on January 23, 2012 at 3:25pm

Its amazing what the heart puts out!  Wonderful poem.

kel

Permalink Reply by Tabitha R. Pike on January 23, 2012 at 4:31pm

Thanks kellie I am glad you liked it.

Kellie Mc Carthy said:

Its amazing what the heart puts out!  Wonderful poem.

kel

Permalink Reply by Tabitha R. Pike on January 23, 2012 at 4:31pm

So glad you stopped by to read this one. Glad you liked it.
Birgitta Abimbola Heikka said:

Good poem. I liked the rhythm from beginning to end.  My favorite lines were:

 

"My mouth speaks no sound

While my soul seeks to be found

My body is a vessel

With such verdict it wrestles."

 

Loved it.