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Thank you for the imput I forgot to mention that the part that is on the site was not edited but the finished manuscript was. I apreciate the imput on the names of the characters as well I used the name Sylvin as a character because every online game I have ever played and there has been more than a few I have used that name Sylvin Nightshade. the name Mithradier I got from another character a friend alsways used I have read the tolkien books and honestly had not considered that it had been used as one of gandalfs names I do see where your comming from there. Thank you for your imput and I don't get mad I take all advice and constructive criticism with an open mind.
Anna L. Walls said:Please, please, please don't be angry with me. I too published through AuthorHouse. I read your first paragraph and it made me wonder if you had it edited. I know AuthorHouse requires it, so I was amazed to see so many errors. I don't think I saw a single comma in the entire entry, and some of the sentences were quite awkward. And the names: Mithradier I think will always be connected to Gandalf for anyone who has read Lord of the Rings (forgive me if this is indeed the case) and Sylvin is the name of the elven race. Perhaps if you weren't writing about Mages and such, these names would be less noticeable, but I kept expecting Gandalf to show up. Granted, I only read the first paragraph, but still.
Again, please don't be angry with me. I hunger for such feedback on my own work all the time.
Willing to help
Anna
Sean Falconer said:http://www.seanlfalconer.com/
I am working on getting this website completed it is pretty much in tact and I also have a bit of a preview to my book there. anyone interested in looking at it is certainly welcome to do so.
Hi hate to sound snarky, but you really need to use a spell-checker before you put things out in public, especially on a website devoted to writing. Perhaps you're just rushed, and making mistakes, although I scarcely think that could excuse the grammatical errors in your response to Anna's note. Might I suggest using Firefox for your responses in public forums? My own spelling is a little on the shaky side, particularly as I get older and I start to second guess myself on the correct spelling of words like "wine". Firefox underlines misspellings in form-entries (although it's dictionary is not 100% reliable), and has been a face-saver for me in keeping a blog. Best of luck.
Sean Falconer said:Thank you for the imput I forgot to mention that the part that is on the site was not edited but the finished manuscript was. I apreciate the imput on the names of the characters as well I used the name Sylvin as a character because every online game I have ever played and there has been more than a few I have used that name Sylvin Nightshade. the name Mithradier I got from another character a friend alsways used I have read the tolkien books and honestly had not considered that it had been used as one of gandalfs names I do see where your comming from there. Thank you for your imput and I don't get mad I take all advice and constructive criticism with an open mind.
Anna L. Walls said:Please, please, please don't be angry with me. I too published through AuthorHouse. I read your first paragraph and it made me wonder if you had it edited. I know AuthorHouse requires it, so I was amazed to see so many errors. I don't think I saw a single comma in the entire entry, and some of the sentences were quite awkward. And the names: Mithradier I think will always be connected to Gandalf for anyone who has read Lord of the Rings (forgive me if this is indeed the case) and Sylvin is the name of the elven race. Perhaps if you weren't writing about Mages and such, these names would be less noticeable, but I kept expecting Gandalf to show up. Granted, I only read the first paragraph, but still.
Again, please don't be angry with me. I hunger for such feedback on my own work all the time.
Willing to help
Anna
Sean Falconer said:http://www.seanlfalconer.com/
I am working on getting this website completed it is pretty much in tact and I also have a bit of a preview to my book there. anyone interested in looking at it is certainly welcome to do so.
My website is http://AnnaLWalls.weebly.ocm - There I've posted the synopses for most of my books. There's also a little widget where you can read a sample of my book and the reviews it has received.
My blog is http://AnnaLWalls.blogspot.com - There I generally post samples of my writing from my different books, though that's not all I post there. The same widget for reading a sample of my book is here too. Recently I've started a blog novel on a second tab. THE FORTUNES OF MAGIC - look for the link under the fish tank. Give a little attention to my cat too.
That said, I'd really appreciate any suggestions.
Anna, your first link doesn't work if you'd like to adjust it. It's the ocm at the end. :) I'll add the correct one here so no one misses the chance to check it out. :)
http://annalwalls.weebly.com/
I have a suggestion for that site. I would have details of your currently published book right there on the home page, plus a link to buy, and then link to the rest from the home page in the main section as well as the sidebar.
Does your sidebar have a character limit? Because I'd have assumed the book was called King of Right from that, and not King by Right of Blood and Might. You're not doing yourself any favors with the search engines by shortening it there if you don't need to.
For your unpublished ones build some excitement by adding when the publication date is estimated to be if you know, and a countdown ticker to that date. If you don't have a solid date, add something like Coming in Fall 2010 or whenever you think roughly they will be. You want any fans of King by Right of Blood and Might to take note of what's next. That's a very quick first impression. :)
Anna L. Walls said:My website is http://AnnaLWalls.weebly.ocm - There I've posted the synopses for most of my books. There's also a little widget where you can read a sample of my book and the reviews it has received.
My blog is http://AnnaLWalls.blogspot.com - There I generally post samples of my writing from my different books, though that's not all I post there. The same widget for reading a sample of my book is here too. Recently I've started a blog novel on a second tab. THE FORTUNES OF MAGIC - look for the link under the fish tank. Give a little attention to my cat too.
That said, I'd really appreciate any suggestions.
Kay Elizabeth said:Anna, your first link doesn't work if you'd like to adjust it. It's the ocm at the end. :) I'll add the correct one here so no one misses the chance to check it out. :)
http://annalwalls.weebly.com/
I have a suggestion for that site. I would have details of your currently published book right there on the home page, plus a link to buy, and then link to the rest from the home page in the main section as well as the sidebar.
Does your sidebar have a character limit? Because I'd have assumed the book was called King of Right from that, and not King by Right of Blood and Might. You're not doing yourself any favors with the search engines by shortening it there if you don't need to.
For your unpublished ones build some excitement by adding when the publication date is estimated to be if you know, and a countdown ticker to that date. If you don't have a solid date, add something like Coming in Fall 2010 or whenever you think roughly they will be. You want any fans of King by Right of Blood and Might to take note of what's next. That's a very quick first impression. :)
Anna L. Walls said:My website is http://AnnaLWalls.weebly.ocm - There I've posted the synopses for most of my books. There's also a little widget where you can read a sample of my book and the reviews it has received.
My blog is http://AnnaLWalls.blogspot.com - There I generally post samples of my writing from my different books, though that's not all I post there. The same widget for reading a sample of my book is here too. Recently I've started a blog novel on a second tab. THE FORTUNES OF MAGIC - look for the link under the fish tank. Give a little attention to my cat too.
That said, I'd really appreciate any suggestions.
Okay, I take the dare. I just finished the first round of redeveloping my 3 year old website about an hour ago. Have loads more to do: need to change the design of my blog, and add a lot of content. But it's a step in the right direction, I hope. My main concern is the About page. I took the risk of using a testimony from a friend, and I'm worried that some might think it's egotistical. I was advised to use it by a web consultant with a lots of experience with writers. I do know that we have to do everything we can to maximise our potential of self publicity. But I'd truly appreciate honest feedback.
My website is http://www.brokenwhole.com
Thanks for the opportunity! Keith
Sorry for the misspelling. I was being so careful to get weebly spelled right. I've done that before. I've never run into a character limit yet so I'll fix that title right away.
Your suggestion about a timer is one I will do as soon as there is something to count down. They are books I intend to publish but as of yet I have nothing set. As soon as one of them is in the works somewhere, there will be some sort of timer. Thanks for your input.
Anna L. Walls said:Kay Elizabeth said:Anna, your first link doesn't work if you'd like to adjust it. It's the ocm at the end. :) I'll add the correct one here so no one misses the chance to check it out. :)
http://annalwalls.weebly.com/
I have a suggestion for that site. I would have details of your currently published book right there on the home page, plus a link to buy, and then link to the rest from the home page in the main section as well as the sidebar.
Does your sidebar have a character limit? Because I'd have assumed the book was called King of Right from that, and not King by Right of Blood and Might. You're not doing yourself any favors with the search engines by shortening it there if you don't need to.
For your unpublished ones build some excitement by adding when the publication date is estimated to be if you know, and a countdown ticker to that date. If you don't have a solid date, add something like Coming in Fall 2010 or whenever you think roughly they will be. You want any fans of King by Right of Blood and Might to take note of what's next. That's a very quick first impression. :)
Anna L. Walls said:My website is http://AnnaLWalls.weebly.ocm - There I've posted the synopses for most of my books. There's also a little widget where you can read a sample of my book and the reviews it has received.
My blog is http://AnnaLWalls.blogspot.com - There I generally post samples of my writing from my different books, though that's not all I post there. The same widget for reading a sample of my book is here too. Recently I've started a blog novel on a second tab. THE FORTUNES OF MAGIC - look for the link under the fish tank. Give a little attention to my cat too.
That said, I'd really appreciate any suggestions.
I do not have either a blog or a website at this time, however I am planning to get a website. Do you have any suggestions on how and where to start?
Hi, I don't have a blog, but I do have a website (that I have actually been having technical trouble with the past two days; I think everything is okay now). Nevertheless, I would love for you guys to take a look at it, read my excerpts, my one review, the whole set up. Would love feedback.
www.jayemurphy.webs.com
Hi! I do have a website created for my book. It is www.seasonsandelements.com. I do have a blog but I don't update it. I figured between Facebook, Authors Den, the website, and writing - I can't spread myself too thinly. I'd love some fresh eyes to take a look at the site and let me know what you think. On the site I do have a few poems posted as well as the synopsis from the book and some reviews.
Thanks in advance!
Thanks for looking at the site! When I created it on my screen everything looks centered. I guess it looks different on other screens. Problem is I don't know how to correct it lol. Any advice would be greatly appreciated. Thanks again for letting me know! At least now I can work on fixing it LOL
Anna L. Walls said:I took a look. It is very lovely. I wonder why it is so not centered but then that's just my wanting all things centered, balanced, even etc. At any rate, it looks very nice, and it was quite east to navigate. Good for you.
Yolanda Gaston said:Hi! I do have a website created for my book. It is www.seasonsandelements.com. I do have a blog but I don't update it. I figured between Facebook, Authors Den, the website, and writing - I can't spread myself too thinly. I'd love some fresh eyes to take a look at the site and let me know what you think. On the site I do have a few poems posted as well as the synopsis from the book and some reviews.
Thanks in advance!
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