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Permalink Reply by Anna L. Walls on July 16, 2011 at 3:21pm

I'm not a poet, but I'd be happy to glance through a sample of your other writing, however, I can't seem to find it.

Permalink Reply by JB Sullivan on July 16, 2011 at 3:52pm

It's on my blog. The Ebon Rose and The Raven's Fled. Thank you! :D

Permalink Reply by Anna L. Walls on July 16, 2011 at 4:06pm

Do you have a link? I can't find it.

Permalink Reply by Toby Whaymand on July 16, 2011 at 4:27pm

Just read it and it's fantasic!! Love it!! Both me and Anna are working on a sci-fi project that I started.  It would be good to have you on board mate.   I'm away from home at the moment so it hard for me to get to a computer until next week.

 

Anna here is his link:  http://authspot.com/short-stories/the-venom-of-enigma/

 

Enjoy!

Permalink Reply by Anna L. Walls on July 16, 2011 at 4:39pm

Thanks Toby, I found it.

Nice scene, needs a nip and tuck though. How could he understand the age of a sprite? Though her laugh might startle him, I can't equate it to a thunderclap. There are other such little things too. Very nice scene though so don't take my criticism to hard.

Permalink Reply by JB Sullivan on July 16, 2011 at 9:18pm

No, no! You're criticism is brilliant. It is what moulds a writer into a bard. Thank you! Toby, I would love to take a look at what Anna and yourself are cooking up. Thank you.  :)

Permalink Reply by Ann Rodela on July 16, 2011 at 10:18pm

Hey JB.  I enjoyed reading your short story.  I found the sprite delightful.  :)

Permalink Reply by Anna L. Walls on July 17, 2011 at 4:01am

BJ - send me a document of that story and I'll give you a fuller critique. Maybe some of my comments will help. AnnaLWalls@gmail.com

Permalink Reply by JB Sullivan on July 17, 2011 at 10:43am

Will do. Thank you. :)