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Last Love

I loved this boy, I loved him so,

I can't believe he let me go.

He sat this girl upon his knee

and said he chose her instead of me.

My mum came home late that night,

she looked for me I was nowhere in sight.

She went to my room my room was all red,

all it took was one bullet to the head.

She dropped to her knees and picked me up.

And my family came in to see what was up.

My brothers and sisters were crying hardcore.

They found my letter lying on the floor.

On my letter it said dig a h*** six feet deep

and place two shot guns at my feet.

Tell my friends I did my best

and ask them if I’ve passed the test.

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Permalink Reply by Shira Loustaunau on August 15, 2011 at 1:54am

Sad..very sad. There is not much that strength cannot fix if given the opportunity. There is so much more to life than to end it for some idiot! Can you follow through with a happier poem? Maybe one with the strength that is so needed in this one. Overall, this poem gets the attention you seek very well. S.

Permalink Reply by FELISHA FRANCIS on August 15, 2011 at 6:32am

thank you

Permalink Reply by Robert L. Allen on August 16, 2011 at 4:19am

A lot of pain in your work. But know this all shall pass. And the sun will rise again. And love will find you strong. Love comes and goes through life, making us stronger each time...Hang in there!!!

Permalink Reply by william paul henderson jr on August 20, 2011 at 4:32pm

Robert L. Allen said:

A lot of pain in your work. But know this all shall pass. And the sun will rise again. And love will find you strong. Love comes and goes through life, making us stronger each time...Hang in there!!!

Permalink Reply by william paul henderson jr on August 20, 2011 at 4:34pm

i felt your words and know this shall pass and what lies in store for you ahead is the rainbow after every storm. An angel will come into your path and brighten your days and fill your nights with love again as it's always around you. Love hopes all things

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