Poetry

Comment by Mark A. Santomieri on February 9, 2010 at 6:31pm

Kenny:
I don't know if you have a musical bent, but be damned,this is good lyrical stuff. I mean that! There are soo many people out there with similar sentiment.
By the by, don't kill yourself. You have too much to contrbute.

My Best,
M.

Comment by Pink Asassin on February 9, 2010 at 6:40pm

I like that Kenny! :D It's cute. :3

Comment by Kenny Thurman on February 9, 2010 at 11:20pm

thank you guys so much, i am really young and i don't know, i just like poetry. I still go to school, me and my friends keep starting bands like hard core heavy metal boy bands. but no, this is what i enjoy and i am writing more so it can come into publishing. and do not worry, i will not kill myself.

Comment by Pink Asassin on February 10, 2010 at 12:00am

You know, I'm only seventeen, so I know how it is to be a young writer. :) I'm really glad that you're embrasing what you really love, I hope to see you well published someday! :D So, good luck with your poems :3

Comment by Kenny Thurman on February 10, 2010 at 1:59am

oh yeah, hey thanks, maybe i will get a girlfriend then. lol. But yeah, i had an assignment where you had to write a poem for class and i guess i am the best writer. I am only eleven so, i don't really know what i am going to do in life when i get older. I have a hunch that i am going to go into journalism though. I really enjoy it

Comment by Pink Asassin on February 10, 2010 at 2:10am

Lol, just wait till you get to high school; most girls really love a guy who can make and apreciate poetry(especially if you make a poem just for them ;) ), although I know that's not for a few years, but it'll happen. :)
Yeah, who knows what any of us will be doing in say fifteen years, but for now I guess it's good to do what we really like to do, that way we have good memories to think back on when bad times come up. :) Sorry, if I'm being too deep, or "mom-esk" just tell me,lol XD I do it a lot, and don't even know I'm doing it. (it annoys my friends lol) XD Ha ha. So, just tell me to stop and I will, I promise. :3

Comment by Pink Asassin on February 10, 2010 at 2:10am

Wow I have a big mouth, lol XD

Comment by Kenny Thurman on February 10, 2010 at 2:33am

no, no, dude, you are cool

Comment by Kenny Thurman on February 10, 2010 at 2:37am

Ron The Baton
Written By Kenny Thurman
I saw that man run through the wall,
It was at JC Penny’s in the mall,
I couldn’t wait to see him haul,
Until I slowly watched him fall,
I waited for people to give the police a call,
When he suddenly started to ball,
I then saw him trying to crawl,
But he started blurting to us all,
I saw that he was in a bad mood,
When he started eating all that food,
I decided the guy was cool,
But he was a major fool,
Because not to fall is a major rule,
In my school,
So he doesn’t have to be so cruel,
I just saw him drool,
Only few people knew what was going on,
When he said his name was Ron,
The baton.

Comment by Pink Asassin on February 10, 2010 at 2:56am

lol, I'm glad to hear that XD
I really like that poem by the way; it's Whimsical, and also has some of the embarrassment of school life. Very well done. :) I only have one suggestion, maybe instead of "run through the wall" maybe "run into the wall", but that's just a tiny, little thing. :) Good stuff Kenny! :D

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