Poetry

Comment by Keith Rice on May 22, 2011 at 2:28pm

Not much. I've been real disappointed with the way things work on sites like this. I'm not sure what I expected, but this isn't it. I just thought I'd try writting something for fun to see If people liked it, but no one sees it. Guess it was worth a try anyway.How are things going for you?

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Comment by Pink Asassin on June 1, 2011 at 10:22pm

Well, Keith, where have you been putting your stuff? Most people read the poems you put right here in the comments :) Also, another good thing you can do, is ask someone, say, hey, I'll read and give feed back on your story if you'd do the same for mine? 

     I'm doing alright, I think I'm finally getting the insparation I needed to get my butt trying to actually finish a story,lol XD I'm a procrastinator :p

 

Comment by Keith Rice on June 5, 2011 at 2:48pm

thanks for the kind words Shira, I really appreciate the feedback.

Comment by Keith Rice on June 5, 2011 at 3:06pm

Pink Asassin, I can't tell you how much I appreciate your help. When you finish that story, I'd love to read it. Good luck, and thanks for the comments.

Comment by Robert L. Allen on July 15, 2011 at 5:02am

Callie, I like your poem, (You're More Then You Think). It had a lot of strength and passion. The line, you put yourself down, I had to read it twice. I took it in a different contexts. I understand what you meant, but at first I thought is was possitive, by putting one's self down and allowing fate to take us down an ubknown path, which would lead to the true self. Thank You for inviting me to read it. 

Comment by K. L. Parry on July 18, 2011 at 9:01am

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Comment by K. L. Parry on July 18, 2011 at 8:03pm

:)

Comment by FELISHA FRANCIS on August 14, 2011 at 6:28am

I think i'm the youngest in this group, kinda feel odd..... :)

Comment by FELISHA FRANCIS on August 14, 2011 at 6:41am

My smiling mask'

by Ceilia

 

I was once sad and lonely,

Having nobody to comfort me,

So I wore a mask that always smiled;

To hide my feelings behind a lie.

 

 

   Day          by         day,

I         was      slowly      dying.

    I      couldn t go    on, 

 

There was something missing..

 

Until now I'm still searching

For the thing that'll stop my crying.

For someone who'll erase my fears,

For the person who'll wipe my tears.

 

But till then I'll keep on smiling.

Hiding behind this mask I'm wearing.

Hoping one day I can smile,

Till then, I'll be here.. waiting.

 

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