Maryanne Widau's Page

I am a little concerned, I like the Twilight Saga, but I don't want to be accused of liking drivel.  I wrote some fanfiction for Twilight as a contest submission. I said I'd never do it, but I could not resist. I would like someone to read it and give me an opinion on my writing style; I need some critique. I am working on a novel right now and I do not want to post anything original here for fear someone will steal my ideas. I won't to know if I need better discriptions and how to slow things down and let things flow naturally.http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6979679/1/Until_Your_Heart_Stops_Beating I'm not getting any reviewsand I don't understand why. I've had over 200 hits on my story.